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Matthew's avatar

Very nice Eva. I've not tried a long interior monologue. My MC's thoughts never occupy more than a sentence or two. Not like me in real life at all 😂🤔😭

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Eva Langston's avatar

If you haven't read Rebecca Makkai's post on Interiority, you should; she breaks it down SO WELL.

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Matthew's avatar

You're right. Found her

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