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Adult Speculative Fiction / Time Loop Fantasy

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Welcome to another Query Guru post! Today we’ll look at the query letter of an adult contemporary fantasy. It’s something of a time loop fantasy — too bad I didn’t get this out in time for Groundhog Day!

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Here’s the query letter: